Your presence
is my cloth,
strength,
and reputation
the daylight pierces the horizon
again as a prelude to rain
and I wonder how long You'll tarry
for I am sown
in corruptipon,
weakness,
and dishonor
today
let me be somber
if not pacified
removed from apathy
as a prisoner
of God
A contest entry
- if you save a few... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
475 points, ended June 30, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive Criticism
Comments
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let me be somber
if not pacified
removed from apathy
as a prisoner
Well I loved this deep work my friend....truely very warm and very a beautiful write is here ..Thank you so much for entering in my contest my friend...
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