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P-P-Perfection

Her mind calculates perfection,
Perfection=(starvingxpurging)repeat.
The method is always repeated,
Such the perfect deceit.

The words whore, slut and skank,
Carved into her arms with art.
Markings added, markings lost,
All drawn with shattered hearts.

The most loyal bestfriend,
That anyone would ever need.
Such the perfect mate,
Alone she carves herself to bleed.

Her arms saturated in lies,
And her eyes laced with fake.
Lying restless in bed all night,
She just has to stay awake.

The lies never tasted so sweet,
The deception never lasted so long.
The pain quickly ended by weakness,
They always said she was so strong.

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  • SarahEatsAirplane
    June 22, 2007

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    yeah i can geuss them and this is pretty... sad. im sorry darling it makes me fel really bad for you...
    but oh my you have an excellent way with words.!


  • autumns rising
    June 22, 2007

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    "The lies never tasted so sweet,
    The deception never lasted so long.
    The pain quickly ended by weakness,
    They always said she was so strong."

    I know this feeling. I got my Report card today and i didnt get anything lower than a B. My parents are all "your so amazing and strong, you'll be the one to succeed" but they dont get it. They dont know me. anywho i am done rambline, nice job love


    • CazzieJade
      June 22, 2007
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      I feel so crap at the momentt.
      And I shouldn't, I should be happy.

      But I'm not.