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cloud

fog hungrily swallows
the evening sky;

only unanswered
darkness remains,

haunting earth
like ghostly questions.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Candy6
    June 22, 2007
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    a good poem


  • Lavender Butterfly
    June 22, 2007
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    well deserved... x


  • between slices
    June 22, 2007

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    oh, i love the image you paint here.. i like how you connect "storming" with fog. and "enigma" to it's thicket. lovely concept, and true feelings too. "ghostly questions".. damn sure. the cloud of doubt.

    awesomeness!


  • Tangled Angle
    June 22, 2007

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    Amazing.
    A very talented poet must have written this.
    Creative and chilling.
    Great job!


  • Griswold silver member
    June 22, 2007
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    very nicely done, good luck


  • countrybabe gold member
    June 22, 2007
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    Very Nice


  • Zimora de Rhyven
    June 22, 2007
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    true for the fog hides all

  • Tangled Angle
    June 22, 2007
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    Your prompt:

    Storming Enigma

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