fingers press
to whispered glass;
reflections cower
in shivering shrouds.
A contest entry
- One more quickie before I leave for awhile, but will continue when I return by Naridill.
300 points, ended June 22, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical comments are most welcome.
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Nice word choice - nearly every one has strong emotional conotation attatche to it. The imagery has a lot of punch because of this even though there are so few words. Great!
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Congrats!
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wow, nice imagery "whispered glass"
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I love this.
Just amazing.
You know I wouldn't be surprised if this won something.
Good luck to you!
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Very interesting, I really dislike the last word, but thats only personal, doesnt affect your write, nicely penned.
Much luck and thankies for entering.
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nice
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Nicely Done
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Your prompt is - 'Mirror Mask'
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