The tangerine pink
Setting in the West
Makes me wish you were
Here, holding my hand
As we walk in the sand.
Hot as that big ball is,
My fire for you burns hotter.
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I miss you, baby! Can't wait til you're home!
Please tell me what you think
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I like. I especially like that 'tangerine pink'--something that by all means shouldn't make sense, but actually does. Very romantic and somehow tropical. Oh, and I guess I should say hi, remember me?
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how could i forget you, sweetie?!?
yeah, i actually googled a color dictionary, and looked through hundreds of different colors, looking for the right one to describe the color of the sun upon setting that night... and then ended up making that one up, cuz the only colors that looked right had such obscure names that i didn't think anyone would get them.
if only we were on a tropical island
wouldn't life be just grand?
glad to see you're back! i will read your new stuff when i'm not so tired. thanks for the applause & for stopping by!
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This is simple, saccharine but incredibly heartfelt. Beautifully expressed longing in minimalist form.
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