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You make me whole


Fireworks sparking the destruction of emotions
As the flames of desire run wild
Intrigued with provoked sophistication
Perplexed like a mystified child.

Illumination explodes from the DARKside of life
Sprightly kinetic energy dances around
DARK shadows forming on the ceiling, alive
Creep and then jump to the ground.

Determination exhumed from within my depths
Finding love from the forces of your soul
Retrieving the destruction of my past
And making me again feel whole.




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  • theDARK1 gold member
    June 22, 2007

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    crafted in a magnificent way. i even give you kudos about how you noticed that two words stand out from all of the others, even though it wasn't a requirement. it can only be a plus
    DARK