In my mind I feel your grace
Your touch and heavenly embrace
But when I look into your eyes
I find my reality to apprise.
I dance alone on this bare floor
Draped with crimson; blood and gore
Dirt incrusted wounds of feet
From where the blades and flesh did meet.
Air and tears; what's left remaining
Trapped in an unforgiving painting
If only you were by my side
My invisible enemy and guide
A contest entry
- Choose A Title by piccola.
700 points, ended June 28, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a very dark piece.
It would almost seem like it was a nightmare that you must have had a few times.
The emotions are so strong behind them that this write made me want to cry.
Amazing wriet!!
~Maya -
I agree, this is a really dark piece. An enjoyabe read though. It had some good flow to it. Keep up the good work.
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Dark...and I don't really understand but it's well written and its all good. Thanks for the entry.
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