You think you are
what I missed.
To me, you just don't exist.
Your ego is something I can't believe.
You think you know me, but you're easy to deceive.
You think I need you
Well you're wrong
You think I'll die without you.
But "SURPRISE", I am strong.
So go on and do what you will.
You think I care?
I've had my fill.
A contest entry
- Almost everything allowed!! by Systems Malfunction.
315 points, ended June 27, 2007, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sarcasm by Edna Sweetlove.
850 points, ended July 6, 2007, 19 entries
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I love a poem which is 100% suitable for the contest it is entered into in.
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Decent poem. It seemed to me like there were some forced rhymes, but besides that it is still pretty good. Good luck in the contest!
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cool.
this is nice. I like the way the rhyme scheme goes from one thing to another... lol. good job! I really like it.
Crimson -
You go Girl say it like it is, when its done its done getting out is the only option A most enjoyable read Thank you
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wow great piece. that is very harsh and dark. so emotional great job.
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Damn Girl!
I absolutely, positively loved it. Your writing style is spectacular and your ryhming is magnificent. I was curious if this was a random poem or about someone inparticular. Either way it is amazing. The words are great! Again, another fantastic poem from you, keep it up. You Rock! LOL
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