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Thunder

rumble grumble
thats all i hear
rumble grumble
is what i fear
rumble grumble
makes me tear
rumble grumble
thats all i hear

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  • LadyOfFate
    July 25, 2007

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    very nicely done, but you could have taken it into something stronger. describeing the storm. the lighting, the howls of the stuff, the whipping noise. also you marked this as humor I see no humor dear. It is nice, but I know you can do much better.