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Round and bright,
see her gleam; Luna’s glow,
her bright moonbeams. A sphere alone
in midnight sky, to light the path where the
angels fly. At times, she plays hide and seek, as
behind the clouds, you’ll see her peek. Once a month,
she’s all but gone. Don’t worry though, she’ll be moving
on. Each day she grows a little more, to expose a greater
light than before. In due time, she’s a quarter to, see
her mighty, waxing view. Now look again to see,
her shedding light by the degree. Another day
passing by, and then you’ll see real soon,
Luna takes center stage, a bright
and glowing full moon.
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Its a great description of the moon Storm, I like it very much and the shape puts me in mind of it as well.
well done
Adrian
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LOL, I'm doing the shape poetry class here, and my poor moon lookes liek someone dove off the side, leaving it a wee bit flat. Oh well. But thank you for the comments Adrian, appreciate it.
Storm
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Perhaps your shape is not perfect but that is why we practice
I know if you were to practice this shape a bit more you would nail it to perfection
Blessings
Bel
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