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Break the Silence

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I play my music                            
to reach your soul
wanting you to feel my heart
My fingers bleed as I pluck
each note
If I play sweetly enough,
will I be released from this cage
Will I be able to see the face
that my song was written for

I long to hear your voice

calling my name

Let me break the silence

 

 

 

 

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    July 23, 2007

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    Thanks for entering...

    Goodness. This is so short, and yet the aching sadness in your words make me feel so solid, and weighted down. What a poignant piece of poetry...

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Faerie

  • Whoochi gold member
    June 23, 2007

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    Hey you....so what I am away for a few days and I come back to such brilliance with you & your muse burning up the pages...Hell, I need to go away more often.HA! Cannot get rid of me that easily, eh? This is splendid, I can feel the longing that one desires to be heard, sometimes falls on deaf ears, but that will just make us sing all the dam louder....way to go, my BB....All my love xoxoxo Best of luck


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 22, 2007

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    This was an intriguing and thought provoking piece, wonderful rhythm and rhyme! Your smooth pursuit and imagery just kept me glued...good luck in this contest Missy ~Tia