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Hell

Get me out of this place
Get me out of this hole
I tried to reach out
Tried to grab your hand
You seemed to disappear into no Man’s Land
Darkness is feeding upon my soul
I could try to run
But I don’t know where to go
Can’t scream
Can’t bleed
Can’t do a damn thing
Stuck in this damn place
This inferno we call HELL!

help me out what do you people think

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  • Mr.Cat
    June 28, 2008
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    Very good! It's almost a song.