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A Cry for Help

I sit on my bed
With a heavy heart
I pretend it don't exist
Anything to make it go away

I try distraction --
Nothing
Breathing --
Nothing

Why is it so hard
Why must it be?
I'll do anything now
Would someone help me please?

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written 6/21/2007
@ 5:42pm
by Erin

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  • Corinthians13-4
    June 26, 2007
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    Wow, what is going through that head of yours? Whatever it is, at least it is coming out in a positive way. Call me, we'll talk about it. Great job.


  • reinhardt-napoleon
    June 22, 2007

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    oh, i would love to help if i were near you... so i do everything i can do: sending you
    great written!
    i especially love the second stanza!
    keep on writing - i'm keeping on!
    stop suicide.
    joey