When we fall in love, it happens
fast and it's great.
When we lose our hearts to the other
person it's scary.
They have the ability to keep it safe
or break it.
When they choose to break it, they
break it with no mercy.
But those are the choices we have,
so make them.
When our hearts are broken, it
to happens fast.
We gather the broken pieces together
and bit by bit we put our hearts
back together.
We don't think we will be able
to get over them, but we will.
We have to, so that when we finally
do meet the right person we can give
them our hearts with no fears of it being
broken ever again.
We know they will keep it safe and never
hurt us.
That is the power of true love, keeping
and protecting our hearts so they
won't break.
Author notes
Just remember that your heart will make it through the rough times.
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your definsion of true love sounds great,Great poem Dem
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not bad
i like the general idea behind the poem and it does stand out on its own throughout the piece. But for me the flow was a little choppy. some points it seemed to be forced and not just flowing as it was in other areas. but overall i like the poem. just am sometimes a hard critic -
Having your heart broken is very hard.It causes people to do things they normaly would not do. This is a very good write. I know how it feels to have you heart riped out and broken.
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Having your heart broken is part of life, and you're right, we do heal. We have to experience bad times in order to appreciate the good times. Each bad experience teaches us valuable lessons so that hen we cross a similar path, we're more prepared to be able to handle it. Most of what we feel is because we've allowed ourselves to feel. What people do to us is hat we allow them to do. If it isnt right, we should insist they stop or walk away from the situation. Love hurts, yet is also heals.
Thanks for sharing your wisdom.
La x
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