Maybe it was never meant
Never truly meant to be
But of all our little hearts
Why did it have to be me?
So she wept inside the fountain
The waters, cold, disguised a tear
As her heart mended from breaking
For memories to disappear
Was it ever really real?
Or was it really just a lie?
I just wish it wasn't me
Why I ask? O ever, why?
Once so pure, once just an angel
Once so innocent in love
The little fallen child rested
Wings were sent down from above
The fountain had been her secret place
So up above the angels swore
As the young girl went to heaven
That's where she'd rest, forever more
Author notes
Inspired by moon dancer's entry.
PICTURE #1 in Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Pick an Image and write what comes to mind
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Pick an Image and write what comes to mind by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended June 26, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Round 1: Hit me With your Best Pre-write. by edit my world..
425 points, ended October 20, 2007, 64 entries
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Wow! This is truly beautifully done. I like the style, the storyline and it paints some lovely images to boot! A great entry for the contest and impressive!
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who knew -- i'm inspiring!!!
hohoho! thank you for being inspired; i'm glad my poetry strikes emotion in the hearts of others.
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What a very sad poem you have written here
There are a lot of feelings pouring through your words and I didn't you have translated that picture very well!
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sorry, can you restate that? I don't really understand the second half of your comment.
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you have a lot of emotions written and you have interpreted the picture very well
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Okay. Thank You!
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hohoho looks like you've got some competition...
fabulous!!!!!!!!! 
Lise!
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