and it was worth every moment
a memory slips away
and i try to find it
to write about it
to think about it
but it escapes me
but even though i can't remember
i know the sacrifice was worth it
was worth every second
and every moment
that even though now
after all these years
all i can feel is pain
it was worth
so worth it darling you don't even know
the pain was a cost that when you left me
i'll still die alone
but i was loved
and as the saying goes
i drop a rose on your grave
but darling you don't even know
how eagerly i would have paid the price
for im following soon
because only you
were keeping me alive
and my words are not as
morose as they really seem
but there is an underlying tone you cannot hear
A contest entry
- Make me cry by xHeartofDarknessx.
300 points, ended September 21, 2007, 17 entries
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Comments
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Very Well Writen
it was very hard to decided the winner
but all in all evan though you were all very good
and hope you will enter my next contest comeing soon
so i am now saying tank you for takeing part in my first contest
Kepp up the good work
Thanks
xBx
"i drop a rose on your grave
but darling you don't even know
how eagerly i would have paid the price
for im following soon
because only you
were keeping me alive"
Very sad loved this bit the most thouhg
made me cry
Thanks Again
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