as soapy suds drip
and teatree oil slips
we embrace
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A contest entry
- 10 words (Quickie) by sheltered.
300 points, ended June 21, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short and Sharp!!! by Daizy21.
800 points, ended January 11, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pixiku with Inventor of Pixiku Poetry by SEA angel.
360 points, ended January 22, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - haiku or short forms over age 15 please by misticmoonlite.
525 points, ended January 30, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is so beautiful!!
-Lemon Bee-
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different, but yet can envision it, very nice piece, thank you for this entry
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Nice sensual piece.
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Nice and short, words written in such a way that it throws up so many thoughts and visions (most of them scandalous).
Good write.
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This is pretty. Very nicely done. Oh, you have taken gold with it in the past...yay!!! It is beautiful Best luck to you in the contest.
Kelli
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Sensual
Yikes...
Did I miss the "Do Not Disturb" sign on the shower door. My apologies... Carry on... 
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Nice Haiku congratulations on the gold trophy thanks for entering my contest I wish you the best of luck
RedwingSpirit
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HOT hot hot...Straight to the point!
I like this!Well done poet, and good luck! -
Congrats!!
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Nice imagery. Love it.
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I like this very much.
Ten words that go a looong
way. Good luck in the
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Love that..
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