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Cold and Frozen

Running through the woods
Stumbling on a hidden rock
Falling quickly to the ground

Rain splashes around me
Creating a curtain of darkness
Dragging me to the depths of delusion

Regretably getting to my feet
Shamefully harboring my agony
Seeking shelter from the shadows

Crawling to my death
Releasing my core to the elements
Leaving my heart to jagged spikes


Whispering my last words
Laying on the frozen cave floor
Bleeding crimson disappointment and deception

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  • MagazinesFall
    June 24, 2007

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    I dont really know what to say.
    It is, like always, an amazing poem but I feel like you should try writing something happy because all this suicide poems are bringing ME down.


    • MagazinesFall
      June 24, 2007
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      CONGRATULATIONS ON WINNING A BRONZE TROPHY!
      SEE I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT!