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Disagreeable love

I can feel his presence.
Feel him there.
Like he's reaching out to touch me.
But can't quite make it.

I feel his eyes.
Resting on my back.
Pleading me to turn.
But I do not.

I want him to leave.
I don't want him there.
He ruined everything.
My sanity, my life.

He broke apart friendships.
He broke apart love.
He took away all that I had.
And I blame him; only him.

Never again will I turn to him.
Never again will we speak.
Why should I, after all that he's done?
He wreaked havoc in my heart.

He doesn't deserve my love.
He doesn't deserve my touch.
He will never again have any part of my heart;
Because I won't agree to his love.

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I wrote about a mix of image 1 and image 4.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 26, 2007

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    Great emotional content in this pice. The imagery is vivid and I really like the whole tone and theme of this. Very well done :D


  • leander Moderators member
    June 23, 2007

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    Ooh, a mix of four pictures quite a good turnout you have here thank you for entering this contest