Cup my breast with hands so soft,
massage them gently till they peak.
Put your lips upon my bosom,
give me the pleasure that I seek.
Kiss tenderly my neck and nape,
my lush wetness awaits below.
You tantalize me inch by inch,
oh feel my sweetness, make it flow.
Come thrill me with lips and fingers,
enjoy my honey as it drips.
Probing deep, sensation lingers,
massaging with touches and sips.
Savor each drop, make love complete,
make me lose all of my senses.
Let me please you with passion's heat,
as your need for me intenses.
You start to thrust, so strong and firm,
inside your pleasure has begun.
Making me moan, making me squirm,
for a moment two become one.
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Sizzling and Steamy!
Really impressed with picture, mood and squirm you portray in this! WOW -
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Nice Comment
Thank you for stopping by and reading. Glad you enjoyed. Take care. Sandy
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Great Passion...
But Mom..I feel shy to comment...
How can I..
'Cause..sons can't express these feelings before Mom in INDIA.
Prem
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this is a wonderul poem the imagery is fantastic very well done to you indeed. good luck in the contest
xxx
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Sandy, this is an excellent sensual poem. You do erotica that brings out the sensations as well as love.
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Thank You My Friend
Hello Jeff, Nice to hear from you.
. Coming from you this comment means alot. You do sensual so well. Thanks for stopping by. Take care. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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This is a very beautiful and sensious picture and your poem... Oh my oh my where do I start.
Passion has blessed your every word with the tenderness of the wings of a butterfly. It caressed the readers imagination to the point of the poem comming alive within them as it has done to me. This really is... A MASTERPIECE...
I loved each and every word of each line... To me.. this is as good as Gold
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Sweet Comment!!!
Thank you Edward, This is a very beautiful comment. I am glad you enjoyed this poem and that my words came to life for you. It was a pleasure to write. You take care, Sandy
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well penned emotions
lovely words flow from your pen,
lights hot fire grows in men.
passion flows to highest heights,
sensual lady's desires writes
rudolf
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Lovely Comment
Sensuous words within me burst
To quench a man's longing thirst
Filling their senses as I write
With warm thoughts amid the night
Hi Rudy, Thank you for the lovely poem in my comment. I always enjoy your comment. Nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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hi my lovely auntie
A nice piece and I see a new background here which is nice as well.
Wish you luck in the contest.
Shahrzad
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Wonderful Comment
Hello sweet niece!!! Your comment was lovely as always. Hope this day finds you well. You take care dear. Love ya, Auntie Sandy
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and this is why you are one of my favourite writers. great sensuality with no smut at all. thank you for having class. viyanna rosemarie
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Hello My Friend
Hi Viyanna, How are you? It is nice to hear from you. Your comment is lovely. Take care and have a wonderful day. Sandy
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my mind is usually full of words, but this time I'm lost for them. This was one of the most sensual, but yet softly put write of two becoming one I have read.
I am honoured you shared such a loving display of passion with us, and hope you take what is rightfully yours, for when you close your eyes it will still shine thru..
Well done My Friend.
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Wonderful Comment
Well Mike, if it left you speechless, then I am very glad. That's a first. Thank you for this wonderful comment. It was pleasing to write. Glad you enjoyed it too my friend. You take care, Sandy
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perfection
oh wow. such a wonderful piece. i spend hours reading poems from various poets and this is by far the poem of the day for me! what a great masterpiece! amazing piece keep pennin'.
jasmine =]
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Glad You Enjoyed!!!
Hello, Your comment was wonderful and so appreciated. Thank you for stopping by. Take care, Sandy
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Sweet and sensual, it would make a virgin blush deeply. Good work. =)
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Great Poem!!!
Thank you for the nice comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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I was enjoying this poem until I got to the last two stanza's when for me it went slightly out of sync.. I think the word "you" on the last line of the fourth stanza needs an "R" on it. in the final stanza I think there is one too many syllables in the second line, I count 9. I would suggest that you just drop the word "me" what do you think. Good luck in the contest. Val
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Great Comment
Thank you for lovely comment and the advice. I appreciate both. You take care, Sandy
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Oooooh sexy hehe. I really like this. It is sensual and sexual but not quite explicit. Great write
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Nice Commet
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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