Small drops falling on my shoulders
Silver rain wetting my cloths
Silent wind flying by
Taking with it the fears, pains and memories
Silence falls with every drop of water
That falls from heavens
Closing the eyes,
I listen to my thoughts
And feel my soul rattling inside
Scared of the fated day
When it'll be departing this world
Angels flying by
Small white wings sending feathers
Down to my weathered body
I fall down on my knees
Bathing in the rain
My brain is empty of thoughts
And my soul is now free
It has flown away
Author notes
This is the last poem I am posting here and the last poem I am writing. It's a bit weird but I couldn't write anything good with eevrything that's going on.
Who knows, it might not be my last but it's probably is.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this write!!!! I enjoyed reading it, but felt a hint of sadness as I went from line to line!!!!!!I truly hope this is not your last..... I just found you.... I need to read more of what you write!!!!!!
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SINCERE , TRUE EMOTION!
Sadness is a strange thing, it takes away our wanting to go on living and experiencing life. I believe we all have had these feelings and somehow we get through them. If you would search deep in your heart, stay and let those feelings come out in writing and in this way you will find the peace and calm you are looking for
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You have a nice flow going on. you shouldn't stop writing no matter whats going. If anything writing should help the situation.
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