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Pride

I live in the House of Want.
The house of struggle, of pain and debt.
I call my body Pride,
And it carries me forward when others falter.
I call my mind Determination,
My heart is Truth, my name Immortal.
This is why I stand straight and tall,
And refuse to give up.

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Just something simple yet strong.

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  • Sweet Sacrifice
    June 21, 2007

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    Great

    You're definately right about it being simple and strong! This is really well written! I wouldn't really change anything about it...I hope you're okayyyy! =D xxxxxxx