As The Flames Struck My Icey Heart,
A Rush Of Pleasure Ran Through My Veins,
And The Urge Of Distruction Sent
A Flash Of Dark Ideas Through
My Already Perplexed Mind.
This Desire Of Distruction
Made The Dark Side Of Me Glow
With The Blood Shot Eyes Of The
Millions Of Walking Dead,
Thus Sparking The Pictures
Of A Kenetic World With
Deep Emotions And Thoughts
That Explode Then Dissolve
Infront Of Your Eyes,
This Sophisticated Way Of
Thinking Only Mystified The
Clear Veiw Ahead,
And The Illumination Brightened
The Fireworks That Had Settled
In My Hearts Frozen Core,
The Intrigued Memories
Provoked The Idea That
Curiosity Was The Light Of The
World!
Author notes
Hope Its Ok
xMx
A contest entry
- wordbank from DARK by theDARK1.
300 points, ended June 30, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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itz fine, but you may want to look at the word 'distruction' a couple of times. nothing will be taken off of your work, but it slows the flow for the reader by not being spelled correctly. now i can tell after reading it that it seems you did take a walk on the DARKside,
DARK
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