Every time I try and say what’s on my mind,
I always chicken out,
And besides,
You never seem to have the time,
I can see the smile that I once loved,
Fading with each passing day,
I have so many thoughts inside of me,
And yet I can’t find the words to say,
I remember those long rainy days,
We sat laughing on the floor,
But now I lay here crying in the exact same place,
Knowing that we won’t be able to do that anymore,
I spend each night going over each word that you have said to me,
Analyzing your sentences,
Into something that they will never mean,
I write you one last letter,
As I am ending my life,
I guess that you were lying when you said,
That you wanted me to be your wife,
I remember that first time that you looked into my desperate eyes,
You were the only one,
Who ever saw past my clever disguise,
And in the end you know I'm right,
Because what I am about to do,
Will finally end all of our fights.
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I have no words to say at the moment. Comments are apprecited.
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WOW!!!!!!
i really loved it and i know what your going through...i was in love with this guy...we dated for almost 8 months and he told me he wanted to get married...i was so happy but then he got word that his dad had cancer so he left...moved to alabama and broke my heart...i wanted to die so bad but i couldn't bring myself to do it...what do they say:let them go and if was meant to be then they will come back...well i hope one day he will come back and i will be ready when he does...i loved it...good luck and keep writing...it helps alot
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deep stuff
wow that was so nicely written. i don't know, but i can kinda relate 2 ur pain there. really sad piece but one that shows ur potential at poetic royalty. fuckin mint poem babe- i'm here if u need me even though i live in England- so far away. but IM me if u ever wanna talk- loved the poem x
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excellent poem it's sad but i could relate to it. keep ypur head up baby girl... i will pray 4 you. 1 luv
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i like this. it was really sad and has a lot of emotion in it. lylas
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fantastic
amazing piece, I love it, very sad on the other hand and it sucks that you feel this way, rhyme was really good and hit perfectly everytime as the emotion prtrayed in this pieced shined through brilliantly. Amazing, you are an awesome poet and keep up the wrighting, remember I'm your friend and I'm here for you
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OMFG, that was amazing, really sad, but amazing poetically...
i hope this is not what you really feel, anyways, if you wanted anything sweety, ill try to always be there...
Love and Light...
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wow, this is really deep I'm here for u
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