I dream of day and night,
Soft kisses and sweet glances.
My angels and demons abide their dwellings
Perfecting what can be perfected;
And back in my room,
Shadows emerge from the smallest crevices
Taunting me, and begging me
For me to wake up and see
What they've brought for me.
Sweet lilac and lavender envelopes me as I sink
Deeper, deeper into peace.
Only one thing can steal me away from sleep tonight
And that's your soft voice
Hovering over me.
My lashes may flutter sometimes, rising only
To the soft hum of the wind at my window.
However, I fall back into unconsciousness,
Waiting for a premature arrival.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very descriptive in the way that you chose to write itm and the descriptions were so VIVID. i really really enjoyed reading this!
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This is a great poem I especially like the line "Shadows emerge from the smallest crevices" great imagery there. Well done!
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this is a wonderful poem very well crated indeed..well done and good luck to you in the contest
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