I don't dare to speak out loud
The thought that makes me shout
I'm hurting,I'm scared,all alone
I'm afraid that by tommorow you'll be gone.
I don't tell anyone what i think
'Cause it will break through our link
I dream of how his love for me will die
And I try to say to myself it's a lie.
My brown eyes burn with unshed tears
I see them happening-my fears
My heart skips a beat-I must leave
Here I have nothing more to give.
A contest entry
- Speaking On Trembling Lips by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended July 2, 2007, 14 entries
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This poem describes how I felt when the love of my bf died for me.
Comments
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Very nice piece of writing my friend flowed great
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I like that you never quite come straight out with what you are afraid of besides lost love- it keeps the poem suspenseful and frightening. Thank you for you entry, good luck to you in all aspects of life.


