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Thoughts

I don't dare to speak out loud
The thought that makes me shout
I'm hurting,I'm scared,all alone
I'm afraid that by tommorow you'll be gone.

I don't tell anyone what i think
'Cause it will break through our link
I dream of how his love for me will die
And I try to say to myself it's a lie.

My brown eyes burn with unshed tears
I see them happening-my fears
My heart skips a beat-I must leave
Here I have nothing more to give.

A contest entry

This poem describes how I felt when the love of my bf died for me.

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  • James R
    June 23, 2007
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    Very nice piece of writing my friend flowed great


  • FlipperSwitch
    June 21, 2007

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    I like that you never quite come straight out with what you are afraid of besides lost love- it keeps the poem suspenseful and frightening. Thank you for you entry, good luck to you in all aspects of life.