So full of yourself,
your ego bigger than your heart.
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10 minute,10 word quickie contest. Prompt: Egotistical
A contest entry
- Contest Contest Quickie, 10 words, 10 entries. 10 minutes. Reserve a spot. By: Cupcrazy by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended June 21, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice slam. good bit of depth, there. all too true in today's world! egos suck. big bottom hearts you make the rockin world go 'round! get on your bikes and ride!!!
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i wish we were able to write more, this would be a great long poem.. oh well, good luck in the contest
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Yours was wonderful to read, keep it and find a contest that will let you go with the longer poem...
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hehehehe, love it
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Yup ego definitely overshadows the heart. great work
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Awww
This is sweet and teasing. Really really good work!!! -
Oh! You wrote it about me, how sweet
Hehe lol. Brillant piece, you genious.
Much admiration.
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everything I do, I do it for you!!!!
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You know it's true!
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You know it's true!
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Spot On
The essence of egotism... making your brain take precedence over your heart. I love it... well done.
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Your Prompt is: EGOTISTICAL
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Nose picking!!!!
Whoop!!!
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