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Connected

Relaxed, content, prepared for my journey;
I put my head back, lie down, close my eyes.
Each breath brings me closer to destiny;
euphoric and floating past earthbound skies.

My heartbeat, my breathing, is all I feel.
I have tapped the secret of the sixth sense.
Troubles and heartaches; are no longer real;
transcending the laws of earths’ binding fence.

Drifting past stars as I open my mind.
Infinity’s finally within my reason
and I drink in beauty of the purest kind.
My mind expands within the new season.

I finely have learned that we are all one;
connected with love since time had begun.

 

 

 

 

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    July 4, 2007
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    Lovely sonnet about physically and spiritually traveling
    into the universe of infinite possibilities. My favorite lines, besides the final couplet are:
    "Troubles and heartaches; are no longer real;
    transcending the laws of earths’ binding fence."

    Great sentement in this write!


  • Miss Ginger Snaps
    June 22, 2007

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    I feel like I am floating in a dream... We are all connected together. Mel


  • BeautifulFlame
    June 22, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    This is amazing! Great work sweety!
    the last line my favorite!

    I finely have learned that we are all one;
    connected with love since time had begun.

    ~Lisa~



  • PoetsAngel
    June 22, 2007

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    This is amazing, I would love to write like this...when I grow up lol. Your words flow beautifully from the page to my head and into my heart. Thank you for the pleasure of the read


  • PerVirtuous
    June 21, 2007

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    This is very, very good. I am impressed. Where did you learn to do this? It is remarkable. Three bunnies.


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 21, 2007
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    beautifully penned

    nice write thank you good luck


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 21, 2007

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    This was like a dance among the stars and drifting into the realm of dreams. So beautiful.
    Soulful Woman


  • Desire gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    Wow!!

    Beautiful Sonnet presentation~ sigh~

    Oooooooooooooooh this reminds me of the meditation
    that brings me to euphoria!!
    Love this one!!
    Gorgeous images!!
    Felt as if there~
    Thank You for sharing this Journey!!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • FallingTwilight
    June 21, 2007

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    Once again, your work never ceases to amaze me. This piece is beyond beautiful. The imagery is wonderful and this sonnet has such a calm and soothing tone to it. Simply amazing.

    Have a wonderful day,

    FallenPoeticAngel


  • RedAquarius
    June 21, 2007

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    Lilting and smooth flow, so soothing! I love the emotions you display here and coax from your reader.


  • StarEyes
    June 21, 2007

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    How true are your words! I have often wondered, and you just said it again, why, if we are all connected from the beginning, then why do fight, and have all these wars, and make things so much worse? We are all connected from the beginning of time, and by love, so why can't we live in peace and harmony?

    Ok, I am ranting again, sorry. But you are right! Love this! Best of luck in the contest!

    Love

    Nyetta


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    Cubbie,

    I had to bookmark this one as it is so true, so very, very true. Very nicely done for a litle tigress with tiny shap paws.



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