Hey, what does it matter?
Hasn't it been said and done?
You need to feel better,
and I'm just not any fun
I wonder why you still bother--
worry about keeping me as a friend
I'm no longer the only one who sees you
No, that time's come to an end
I don't think I'm unworthy
But I don't trust others to see
into the heart I have
and all the good in me
And, Sweetie, you've done nothing wrong
It's just that I'm scared
that you're gonna strike at my heart
and I won't be prepared
Author notes
I don't feel everything this write says, anymore. I feel ~some~ things in it, but not ~all~ of it, as I said.
**This is the first background I ever made!!!
In a list
A contest entry
- For Poets Who Have Never Won a Trophy In My Contests! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended June 27, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
rough draft...?
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Very nice piece, emotional and captivating. It has nice flow and form. Enjoyed it, thanks for the great entry. Hugs, Bunny
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People can leave scars inside of us that take years and years to heal. It makes us a little leary to open up and let someone in again.
I really liked this one Katy.
Roses
Raker
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This was great. But don't worry the only people who could ever miss the good in was never looking at you.
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This is great. you should join the group GraphicOhaulics. It's fun and you can learn a lot. This bg is really pretty. what do you use?
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I meant to leave you these...
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You've got more beauty than anyone will ever be able to appreciate. But someday, someone will know how hard they should try to grasp it, and that'll be the one who's worth these feelings.
With love -
really nice write. I hear some undertones. The rhyme and flow are really well written as always.
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I'm pleased that you are starting to heal
I'm sure with each passing day things will get easier for you. Nice write, and I wish you well in this contest 
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