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Diamonds in the Night

A
tiny
piece of
heaven, lies
against the night,
where little flecks from
moonbeams, radiate their
light. Close your eyes and make
a wish, hope it will come true
tonight. Against the dark, to
see their marveled light,
the stars are these
diamonds we
see ev'ry
night.

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    Wow! Impressive! Beautiful to look at and read. Awesome job on this. Your talent keeps growing.

    Jeannie

  • Celticmoon gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    Simply exquisite!
    Your words are well chosen for form and shape. You have done a wonderful job with this piece my dear


    Blessings
    celticmoon


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      June 21, 2007
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      Whew! Now to see if I can eventually get past a simplistic shape such as this, lol. Thanks for the comments Bel, appreciate it.

      Storm

  • Hetha gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    Flawless Beauty

    I like your form and how the words,(well chosen) flow in this one. Such description and simple beauty. This is timeless! I love it!


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      June 21, 2007
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      Thank you for your comments, much appeciate them. Wasn't too sure about it.

      Storm
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