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Bolts

lighting bolts dart across the sky
like thoughts on the brain
all light, no sound
all thoughts, no speech
random paths across the sky
no logic
no order
no end in sight
just
there

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  • naked roots
    June 21, 2007

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    I loved this.
    I've never thought of creating an analogy between lightning bolts and thoughts before...but it works perfectly, especially since the brain produces electricity. It just all ties in and makes complete sense.
    Excellent poem