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For Trinity

Two hands, two feet
Ringing laughter in her ears
Inside her chest, a beating heart
Nearest her, family, erasing all fears
In her lifetime she’ll experience many
Trinity you lucky girl
You’ve got the entire world in your tiny fist

A contest entry

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  • Empusa
    June 20, 2007
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    ahh


    a poem for a beautiful girl
    with words of feelings


  • Storm-Goddess
    June 20, 2007
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    very cute

    i like this poem . thankyou for your entry and good luck


  • Lord Merlynn
    June 20, 2007

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    Ringing laughers in her ears

    Ringing laughTers in her ears?

    Thanks, a very lovely acrostic, thank you for entering.