All seems to go well
Nothing can go wrong
Leads to hell
I knew this all along
Your plastic smile
conceals your traitorous ways
The numbers I dial
No answer for days
Wait for your call
Waiting so long
I can't recall
What went wrong
A contest entry
- 10 Trophies or Less!!! by Laura Lamarca.
650 points, ended June 27, 2007, 23 entries
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Comments
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I have felt the same, just haven't expressed them in such splendid poetic verse!! This was a fabulous write. Good luck in this contest
~Tia
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we have all been in this place, unhappy in love, waiting for the phine to ring, never rings, a very fine effort here, good writing and a good narrative...very well done...Best of luck to you in the judging...PK
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