(Verse One)
You make me feel special
like you really see me inside
And momentarily I forget
that we're just takin' a ride
(Chorus)
And it won't stay this way
It'll all come crashing down
I'll search for you ev'rywhere
But you'll be nowhere to be found
So I'll try to turn away
'Cause crying's not allowed
They'll all worship you
As I fade into the crowd
(Verse Two)
You're still looking at me
with that fire still in your eyes
And it makes me wanna let you in
I wanna shed my disguise
(Repeat Chorus)
(Bridge)
It's not so bad,
it's happened before
Please understand,
I don't wanna hurt anymore
Put your mind at ease
I can't help being proud
Let me hold my head up
as I fade into the crowd
(Repeat Chorus)
Author notes
You didn't ask, but this is for option 2
**Background by a-bear
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest - Round 1 by BittersweetPhantasm.
525 points, ended June 24, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wow, another song.
Comments
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That was really good the bridge was the best part.
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I really really hope these songs become hits someday. They have so much potential. I at least hope they get recorded so that other people can experience them because so many people would appreciate your writing. You're so talented. You need to teach me!
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I wish I could hear the music, but from what I can read this is great. I don't know what a bridge is...I'm assuming it gets you from one place to another in some special way. Again it seems perfect.
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Great write
Another very good write from you. You are very good at portraying your feelings to the reader. Love the background too
Take care my friend 
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wow - i like these lyric, especially the bridge
It's not so bad,
it's happened before
Please understand,
I don't wanna hurt anymore
Put your mind at ease
I can't help being proud
Let me hold my head up
as I fade into the crowd
thank you.
well done and good luck
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