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Sultry Darkness

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The taste of lust filling my mouth
as I salivate with the thought of having you
Your sweat blending with mine as

I take your body as my sanctuary

Needing your focus on my velvet box

soaking with passion's nectar

My sultry scent leading you

to my wanton haven

Your heat engorged vessel

finding my desires fire

as ecstasy is seized

in the darkness

 

 

 

 

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    September 7

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    your velvet box. I bet its a great treasure..my sultry scent leading you to my wanton heaven..You have a great way with words.....


  • TwilightPanther gold member
    July 12, 2007

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    Cold shower time for sure...My sister you do have away with these love poems...purrrrrrrrrrrrrrr....Hot , Sexy and to the point Thank you so much for sharing


  • patsoldcat
    June 24, 2007

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    final edit

    great work this is so erotic and done in a small amount of lines and words such a hot sexy feel you gave in this.
    marvelously done.

  • Whoochi gold member
    June 23, 2007

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    OH HOLY CANOLI! You are just rockin AP with these brilliant pieces...you know me, short, dark, (Kinda like I like my men ) hahahahha...NOT...sorry moment of temporary insanity...anyWHOO, this is awesome...."as ecstasy is seized in the dark." Hubba, come to Mama.... Best of luck


  • patsoldcat
    June 22, 2007
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    final edit

    hot for sure, and full of love to offer your witch.
    thank you for this.


  • ScarletO
    June 21, 2007

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    That flowed like sugary nectar if I ever read one. So passionately inspiring.


  • Bedroom Eyes
    June 21, 2007

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    Sultry piece you've done here...erotic with a touch of dark flavoring.

    Sensual & tastefully done my friend. Wishing you all the best in the contest!


  • soulfultia gold member
    June 21, 2007

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    This felt sensually dark and you did an excellent job penning this fabulous piece! My pleasure always, ~tia


  • PoetsAngel
    June 20, 2007

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    I love this! Wow...it's kinda warm in here all of a sudden, hang on I need to open a window.........ok back now, thats better. Great write


  • markgrif gold member
    June 20, 2007
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    Tasty!


  • patsoldcat
    June 20, 2007
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    thank you

    blessings and luck

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    I love this one!
    A hot and steamy write with a lot of
    great imagery in it. Best of luck to you
    in the contest and keep it up! Thanks for
    sharing this here.




    Jeremy0826

  • Knight70
    June 20, 2007

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    Love it!!

    I've only been writing poetry for a few months. I want to be able to learn to write erotica, too. This is sure something that I can aspire to. I've been married for 11 years. My wife might appreciate poems like this coming from me. Thank you for inspiring me. I need to go take a shower now.

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