"Today i came to the realization that I am a fool...
Gathering my cards, attempting to play it cool
Am i just another prize in your collection
Why did i offer you my most prized possesion
You had the game calculated even by days of the week.
Hook line and sinker, I fell every time we would speak.
Last night she said she cried,
while I lie in bed praying my tears would subside.
Slipping away in to a slow depression
Holding on to a dream so long it became an obsession.
Next time while in war tell the enemy so she knows,
or she too will come dressed in delicate clothes.
And you in your wool will spot your next prey.
and she too will experience a day like today.
Only the novacaine of time will ease the pain, i project.
Tommorow, i promise, i will re-collect
vowing to be on the look out, my fold to protect.
From wolves who maliciously play on emotions
Tonight is only temporary, tommorow approaches.
Today i rock my fears, hurt, frustrations away.
Tomorrow unlike you, i will still remember today."
Author notes
Force the (r)evolution, think for yourself.
Written August 12th, 2003
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powerful
strong write! oh so true, only the novicacian of time will ease the pain , POWERFUL WORDS i so totally understand! truly a bookmark!! loved it! keep writing i love your words! kisses, jewels -
Woah.. speachless thoughts rolling through my mind. This really makes me think.. life and love a bad mix to put together it causes more problems in the long wrong but i see where you are coming from. I hope everything works out for you.. Keep up the great work
~haunted dreams~ -
awesome!
love sucks!
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yes... very good one! interesting style... keep up!
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asi have said before you have a wicked
intensity in your writing.
very well done.
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First and last lines so tightly knitted together with today/tomorrow/today.
"Only the novacaine of time will ease the pain, i project" you stroke you brush against the raw side of human nature to craft this piece, is is well worded and provocative. -
awsome. just fabulous. loved it.
my favorite lines:
Slipping away in to a slow depression
Holding on to a dream so long it became obsession.
Only the novacaine of time will ease the pain, i project.
Next time while in war tell the enemy so she knows,
or she too will come dressed in delicate clothes
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From wolves who maliciously play on emotions
Tonight is only temporary, tommorow approaches.
Today i rock my fears, hurt, frustrations away.
Tomorrow unlike you, i will still remember today."
a great write....*throws flowers at you*
< 33Laura -
Good
Very good poem. It is well written (flows well) and tells a wonderful story.
Best line for me:
Holding on to a dream so long it became obsession.
Only the novacaine of time will ease the pain
Thank you.
John -
she too will come dressed in elegant clothes...
favorite part!!!
makes me remember those who are capable of hurting me and just act like nothing happend the next day... while i can forgive but never forget! -
(grinning) I really enjoyed that poem. Good Job!
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the revolution is not forced
but written
no need to wait
fate has spoken
no need to listen
for its written in your soul
forever there, forever unknown
the revolution
nice job
sad
but nice job
~*~Blu~*~
ps, dont mind the revolution thing
it sucks
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