The earthly angel, some have heard,
Hath wings like the brightest morning bird.
She watches us to her delight,
And makes sure we will be alright,
She protects us in our darkest hour,
When we're feeling really sour,
She takes all of our cursings,
And turns them into blessings.
With her wings, she touches our faces,
And takes us to our happiest places.
She's each of us that can see,
The best that is in you, or me.
She makes a space in all our hearts,
And finds our single and best parts.
To make us feel alright again,
And help us put paper to the pen.
So that we can find once more,
The poetry we so adore.
Author notes
i cannot remember how i set off, or how I finished.. but.. erm.. hope you like it anyway.
A contest entry
- Second Chances, the Rounds That Never End (Invite only) [#3] by Lady-Pegasus.
900 points, ended July 21, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the line " And finds our single and best parts"
we all need someone who sees the good in us.
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happy hoodwinking
Hey!!!!!!!!!!! You've been hoodwinked!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really great work on this poem, you expressed some really nice thoughts in this piece and it was enjoyable to read, really great work!
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Hood-Winked!
Wow, what an amazing poem!! I think we all have an angel watching over us. Excellent imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading
You have just been Hood-Winked
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Thank you for your contest submission, I do need to ask you review the rules and edit your submission appropriately. Please reply IN COMMENTS to me and let me know this has been done, thank you.
Aside from that, a wonderful rendition from the picture! The concept is great and i love it. A touch bumpym in the tempo but nothing great and easily repaired if you so choose.
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. 
Hetohke'e 
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