the pain blinds her
she can no longer see
how she abandoned all of her friends
for one sharp razor blade
she is blind
she cannot see how many people she is hurting
she cannot see her future that lies ahead
she only sees in her darkness
she only sees the pills she is taking
and taking too many of, ones she doesnt need
she can only see a shiny silver razor blade
she can only see a crimson color coming off her wrist
so bright it glows in her darkness
she is blind
she cannot understand that she needs help
she cannot see that her parents are dying inside
she can only see her sorrows
she can only see her pain
she is blind
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh wow. I've never read anything from that point of view. And this is amazing. I'm definitely going to bookmark it, and read it everytime I feel like this girl. Everytime i'm "blind". Love it!


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Wow.
This is a sad poem,but very good and raw.

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Oh my. This is really sad... Sigh...
I'm sorry darling.
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very interesting. is that poem about a friend? i have a feeling some of my friends would love to write that about me.




