Laying on a cozy bed
She tastes blood on his lips
The man she craved to wed
Now lays beside her cold and dead
It was the only solution in her head
So nicely in her arms he fits
And so her wanting heart is fed
Thriving on heartfelt insanity trips
Author notes
**********OK Sooooo... its pretty gorey, probably NOT what you wanted. BUT HEY! She's evil, and in love? yes? haha!******
A contest entry
- In Love With Death, You Can't Let Go ((Pic Inspired)) by Fey Absinthe.
360 points, ended July 13, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - even the wicked can love occasionally by unraveled.
450 points, ended July 21, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i definitely think you could add more to this piece but it is alright as it stands. definitely gorey. i love the title of the poem. "heartfelt insanity trips" could go so many ways you could probably make a contest with that title. sorry i don't really have any suggestions for this piece, thank you for entering,
<3cassidy -
a dark little stanza~
I love it~
good luck dear~ -
Wow. I get the creepy feeling left by the insanity of the women in the poem. Awesome.
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