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Intoxication

Your arms so strong and true
Wrapping, holding me close
This addiction I have to you
Nothing could help me most.

I cannot help but call your name
When I am helpless and alone
I love the way you play my game
Letting out this tiny moan.

I always wish to be around you
Breathing in your intoxication
Staying fearlessly true
Ever feeling this elation.

And so I leave you with my love
Teasing, Playing and Drowning in you
As pure as the whitest morning dove
Is my addiction so true.

Author notes

I have a bit of an addiction to my love. I have always had it, I cling to someone that I love and know loves me because they make me happy and allow me to please them. (no, not in a bad dirty way you pervs). This is a purely innocent poem with a slight twist. But hey! Its my addiction that I'm happy about.

A contest entry

I don't think an addiction to a person is bad if they make you happy. What do you think?

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  • aslanlight
    July 8, 2007

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    There are so many different forms of addiction and not all life threatening. Loving someone's one of the strongest there is and you've shown that sometimes addiction can be positive as long as you keep a strong sense of self!

    Peace Georgia


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 2, 2007

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    Splendid that you recognize your addiction and am on the journey all us addicts are on...Keen sense of balance felt here..well done!


  • Janice M Pickett
    June 21, 2007

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    very nice

    hehehehe as long as you keep it balanced and do not smother them. addiction to your love can be wonderful.
    A lovely genuine poem. Good luck in thie contest.


  • xTarnishedxSilencex
    June 20, 2007
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    AMAZING

    I love it Katy. It's so beautiful