You're getting married,
because you're in love.
You were put together,
from the God above.
Zach:
You love her with all your heart,
I bet you do.
She's wonderful,
the perfect girl for you.
I bet you think she's beautiful,
no matter what she wears.
I bet you're there beside her,
when she sheds all of her tears.
That's what real love is,
what you have for Brittany.
You love through the ups and downs,
and no matter how silly.
I bet that she's in your every thought,
and that you'd do anything to save her.
You'd probably risk your life,
because she's your whole world.
You love her a lot,
and people can see it in yours eyes.
There's never a day that passes,
that you have to look at her and sigh.
"She's beautiful." you think.
And you think she's too good to be true.
But trust me, Zach my friend,
As much as you need her, she needs you.
Brittany:
There's not a day that goes by,
that you thank God for him.
He's been there for you since day one;
through thick and thin.
He's been your night in shining armor,
the one to piece together your broken heart.
You love him so much,
that nothing could tear you apart.
Your world isn't complete without him,
without him you're lost.
You'd do anything for him I bet,
no matter what the cost.
He is the apple of your eye,
the light of your life.
Without him you'd go through a lot,
of misery and strife.
He's the rock that keeps you steady,
just when you're about to fall.
He's the one who will rescue you,
when the chips are down and you're against the wall.
I bet you wonder why you deserve him,
what you did for such a blessing.
The answer is quite simple:
he needed you and you needed him.
You love him.
You love her.
With you two beside each other,
you'll have a wonderful world.
Author notes
This is for you Brittany and Zach...
A contest entry
- I'll Be Your Crying Shoulder ♥ Love ♥ by forbidden-colour.
530 points, ended September 22, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A great Ode to two people
Thank you for sharing!
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great job
this is the most romantic and beautiful poem i have ever seen, and i mean it! great job!
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wow this is a very nice piece... I can tottaly see someone speaking this to the ones being addressed... I mean it made such a good speech... like was this your speech at a wedding or something? I'm still pretty surprised at how everything well went together... but I guess when you do things from the heart they almost always end up being beautiful... not much else to say but 'when I get married would you mind making me seem like a knight as well?' (by the way I am not getting married anytime soon so just think about it...)
Sluha the Masked Ninja
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aww ♥
i agree with brittany, this should win an award!!! good job!!!
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this is soo sweet! lol nice poem!
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Aw! This is totally adorable.
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ahhh! Amazing! You are SOOO AMAZING! This is sooo perfect I can't wait to read it to him. I am going to call him as soon as I print it. You are the BEST!! Love yah.
GREAT JOB ON THIS BTW!
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
A.K.A. Brittany Lynne.
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you are very welcome...i hope that Zach loves it!!! tell me what he says...and tell me the truth...don't sugar coat it...i can take it...really...
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AHHH! He loved it too! He was like 'That's just how I feel!' and it's how I feel to. You did such an amazing job really! The best I wish I could give you a gold trophy!
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i am sooooooooooooo glad he liked it! i must be a pshycic b/c you and him feel the way i described in my poem! i feel so special...hopefully it finds a way into your wedding like you said...
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Lol I know! IT was just sooo great Awesome. WONDERFUL fantastic job!
Hopefully it will I am pretty sure. It's awesome.
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this is so great...i wish you both the best of luck...you both seem like really nice ppl who deserve each other...life is wonderful when you're in love...♥
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Alright... I'll be back after I read it!!
Brittany
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