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the meaning of life is written inside my lungs

suffocate:


drip across the page
in spider's ink


lip gloss lies
smooth across my mouth
in shades of pink,
cherry, deceit


marble kittens shatter
on linoleum secrets


inhale the sweet toxicity;;
(ornaments for
              organs)











open your saturated eyes
read between the lines
peel away excess flesh:



                                ( uncover the lies )

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  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    July 3, 2007
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    "inhale the sweet toxicity;;
    (ornaments for
    organs)











    open your saturated eyes
    read between the lines
    peel away excess flesh:



    ( uncover the lies ) "


    love this!
    very original
    which is extrememly hard to get lately in the world of dirty pretty.
    great job.<33