Let me think
Let me rhyme
Let me wait
for a thing called time
Let me dream
Let me sleep
Let me wait
for a love so deep
Let me enjoy
Let me choose
Let me win
before I lose
Let me think
Let me rhyme
Let me wait
for a thing called time
Author notes
Option # 3- Time
A contest entry
- Extra...extra..read all about it.. by crimsondew.
600 points, ended July 14, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Shorter The Better! by My Darkness.
400 points, ended July 4, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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the rhyme didn't do it for me, there was a lack of flow to this, due to forcing a rhyme.. thank you for entering and good luck
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A very pleasant poem. It rhymes perfectly. Had fun reading it. Good Luck!
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i love teh way you made this poem rhyme it is a really nice write
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Good
Let me think
Let me rhyme
Let me wait
for a thing called time
Like the theam of this
Nice pattern
Rick
PS: Try reading Forever and a Day", a personel favorite
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