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What You Mean

Day dreams and earthly wishes…

I can’t tell you what you mean.

A drive to the park
Speaking of dreams under the stars
Knowing everything is right…

I can’t tell you what you mean.

You are sitting next to me
There is pain in my chest,
From all the feelings
I’m holding back
Could this be the night?...

I can’t tell you what you mean.

For over a year
I have been short of breath
Too afraid
To let the words out
Too afraid
Of what you might say
You are my best friend…

I can’t tell you what you mean.

What I would give
To hold your hand
My entire life
Maybe even more
Waiting my turn
For that one first kiss
Life is not the same
All I wish to do
Is tell you…

I can’t tell you what you mean.

All this waiting

All this hoping

Waiting for the one moment

When I can say

“I love you!!”

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  • Eyes Full of Rain
    June 21, 2007

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    nice

    I like this poem. It is a truely sappy poem. I don't know what to say really, have you said it yet? I like the structure of the poem, showing how you are feeling and at the end the way you space the lines out building up to the expected but sweet crechendo is bllody good. Good effort keep up the good work.


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    June 20, 2007

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    wow very good, very deep, very understanable. Thank you and great job!!!!!

    Much love and good luck

    KayDee