Standing in the crowd,
a sea of a thousand faces.
Shouts and screams and laughs
coming from different places.
Lights and camera flashes.
Freeze, hold the pose and smile.
Hold my hand tight in yours,
your arm around me all the while.
Face to face
ignoring the crowd.
Your lips on my forehead,
beneath the streetlights crown.
You hold both my hands,
and for you I'd fall apart.
No more pain and hardships.
Just the steady beating of your heart.
A contest entry
- .•¤**¤•. Love .•¤**¤•. by XBeautiful MistakeX.
550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe how the fudge didn't you win that contest!? damn fools

you amaze me!!

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Awe this is soooo sweet!! makes me want to read more and more!! thank you for entering!!
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Sweet as ever! I love it, so beautiful and romantic!
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Beautifully Written
You have peened an amzing piece of love and adornment. Thank you for such a wonderful read and may all your days be blessed with such happiness...Michael
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Beautiful...happy and hopeful...perhaps day dreaming of a special day to come
. Yay for "no more pain and hardships" kick their asses right out of there...Move on to better days. Wonderful Write!!! Keep writing.
Wyatt
xoxox


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