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Light

Now, intelligence
Doesn't come from the sun, dear,
It's consciousness!

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Haiku, all about light and being "bright".

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  • Pollycheck
    December 2, 2007
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    Now, intelligence
    Doesn't come from the sun, dear,
    It's consciousness!

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. I like the way you wrote this, but with a check on two different online syllable counters the count comes up as 5-7-4 vice the required 5-7-5.


  • FarEdgeOfTheBox
    July 6, 2007

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    Amazing. In the Haiku and its title, you happened to use three of my favorite words; Light, Intelligence, and Consciousness.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    June 20, 2007
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    Wow, interesting concept.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    wheeee I ♥ this


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 20, 2007

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    Very nice indeed...well written.

    Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.

    Harrisham Minhas

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