Peter Pan is here your honor,
For crimes that are most awful
For keeping children from their homes
Is something quite unlawful
He had taken Wendy and her brothers
Off to the place called Neverland
They followed not knowing the dangers
Of the world that they can't understand
There they faced pirates, crocodiles
And mermaids whom tried to drown them
Thrown off cliffs in attempts to fly
Which is why, he, we must condemn
When, finally, he let them loose
You won't even believe this
That Mr. Peter Pan did go
And take Jane to the abyss
He wouldn't let her act her age
And kept her there against her will
She didn't want to stay there with him
When he would let the pixie almost kill
Five charges of kidnapping
(Including the poor bear)
To judge in favor of the city
If you do know what's fair
Author notes
I've always thought peter pan was a criminal! ^_^
So I had real fun writing this poem! ^_^
A contest entry
- Fairy Tales on Trial! Either defend or prosecute, or both! by Melodies.
550 points, ended June 21, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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i have already commented... but I'll comment again... just for fun... lol. good job!
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this is really cool. I like the way you wrote it about Peter Pan... ha. good job! keep it up!
Crimson
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