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The Demons pain

A life of sorrow
Pain if you will
All because of him
Professor Hojo

All I did was try
Try to protect her
From the horror
That she was about to face

An unborn child
About to becone
Nothing more
Than a twisted experiment

I saw the horror
Of this experiment
The aftermath
Of my terrible mistake

And even though I failer her
She still showed she cared
She turned me into a monster
To save my life

Now many years later
I am still around
But memories of her fester
Everywhere I go

But still I feel content now
I know what happened
I know how she felt about me
I know she really cared

Author notes

This is about the final fantasy character Vincent Valentine, and his feeling from Dirge of Cerberus about Lucrecia. Tell me what you think about it

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 19, 2007

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    hmmmm, this is better and better, i like when you do stuff like this you give great insight to the characters, keep it flowing


  • KenKen Emmerick
    June 30, 2007

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    AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I fucking love it!!!!!!! i would give u more stars but Alas! it only goes to 3. Funny for me to experience such joy from a poem that expresses such sadness. May Redemption come.

    • 1-Winged-Angel
      July 2, 2007
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      lol well I do try, nice to know that someone likes it . Thanks for commenting and applaudeing I really appreciate it