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Moon Maiden

With her ivory skin and stary eyes,
Enchanting me with her sultry smile.
Raven hair like a cloak against light,
Enthralling me in the dark of night.

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 20, 2007

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    Oooh how beautiful!
    This is an awesome, serene, and lovely write! So much beauty penned in such few lines; I like it!
    Thank you for sharing!