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Darkest Dreams

I sleep,
they waken,
darkening my deepest dreams.
Fetied breath on my prickling neck,
teeth bared, waiting.
They wait for me,
seek for my soul,
those that once loved me,
are filled with hatred of life.
Once it mattered but no more,
I slip further into the darkness
let the teeth take me,
bite, free the blood,
just to stop the horrors,
I now welcome the dreams.
WELCOME TO MY INSANITY!

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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    December 4, 2008
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    nice

    this poem is good.. i like how you decribed your dream! its a good one..


  • Karen Layne
    October 17, 2007
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    well..that's ugly...I really can't say I like this one..it's TOO dark, you know? Try not to forget the light that shines in your soul now...that kind of darkness is...just wrong, really. I know it's a contest thing and not personal, but I really don't like it when you write like that.

  • Karen Layne
    July 3, 2007
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    wow...you REALLY REALLY scare me sometimes


  • ennovy silver member
    June 20, 2007

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    Dark words of Emotions

    and thanks for the invite I shall join you in that insanity as I read this the second time I like. Thanks for entering my contest...novy